This question asks whether education today should go beyond academic subjects to develop other things, such as values, skills and character, and how far you agree.
Question type: How far
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The word 'more' assumes academic study is the settled core to be supplemented, when the real question may be whether the academic core itself is mis-defined, or whether 'more' crowds out the rigour that makes schooling valuable.
degree: almost everyone agrees education should involve some non-academic dimension, so the live question is how much more, and at what cost to academic depth.
How to approach it. Judge how far education should extend beyond academic subjects, defining 'education' and 'academic' and resisting an easy total agreement.
Education today should clearly involve more than academic subjects, because the demands of work and citizenship now require skills and character that exams do not measure; but 'more' must be addition, not substitution, since an education that dilutes academic rigour in the name of breadth fails students it claims to serve.
Where an academic arms race produces stressed, instrumentalised students who learn to game papers rather than think, the call to move beyond academic subjects is not a frill but a rescue, and Singapore's own reforms to reduce mid-year exams concede the point. But the answer to a distorted academic culture is to fix the rigour, not abandon it, since students stripped of deep knowledge are not freed, they are merely under-equipped in a different way.
Education today should involve more than academic subjects, and Singapore's reforms rightly say so; the qualification that keeps the agreement honest is that 'more' must enrich a rigorous core rather than replace it, or the breadth becomes a privilege the disadvantaged cannot afford.
The question rests on a false split: the most valuable education does not bolt non-academic extras onto academic subjects but teaches the academic subjects in a way that already builds skills, character and judgement, so the real failure is not too little 'more', but academic teaching done so narrowly that it forfeits the very formation it could provide.
Resilience built on a sports field, perspective gained through community service and confidence from performance are real and not reducible to classroom subjects, so a purely academic schooling, however well taught, would leave gaps. But these experiences are best understood as part of a broadened education rather than proof that academic subjects are insufficient, since the deepest version of each still draws on the reasoning, knowledge and judgement that rigorous academic study trains.
Education should produce skilled, principled, adaptable people, and to that extent the statement is right; but the better diagnosis is not that academic subjects need topping up with extras, it is that academic subjects taught for understanding already form the whole person, and the failure to be fixed is hollow teaching, not insufficient breadth.
Option A agrees by degree and polices the limit between 'more than' and 'instead of', adding an equity caveat. Option B rejects the premise, arguing the academic-versus-non-academic split is false and the real failure is hollow academic teaching. Both are defensible: A is the calibrated mainstream line; B is the premise-rejecting move that reads as more conceptual if the dissolved dichotomy is sustained.

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