ETG General Paper
2020 A-Level GP · Paper 1 · Question 5

A society claiming greatness

What this question asks

This question asks how far any society can honestly call itself great, and whether such a claim holds up once you ask what it is measured by and who paid for it.

Question type: To what extent

An ETG General Paper original study guide to the 2020 A-Level GP Paper 1 essay on society & culture. Not affiliated with, or endorsed by, UCLES, Cambridge Assessment or SEAB. A study aid, not an official answer.

Read the question first
Define these terms
  • great: morally admirable, or merely powerful and successful, two very different measures
  • any society: whether the claim is available to all societies or only some
  • claim: assert, with the implication that the claim may be self-serving
The hidden assumption

The question's word 'claim' assumes greatness is partly a self-assessment, smuggling in the suspicion that societies declare their own greatness on flattering criteria while hiding the costs.

The calibration axis

conditions: a society can claim greatness on some measures (achievement, stability, justice) but the claim survives scrutiny only when it does not rest on hidden harm to its own people or others.

Two ways to argue it

How to approach it. Calibrate how far any society can legitimately claim greatness, defining 'great' and confronting whether every claimed greatness rests on hidden costs to someone.

Option A · Conditions: greatness on which measure

Any society can claim greatness on some measure, but the claim is only defensible to the extent that its greatness does not depend on hidden costs to its weakest members or to outsiders, so the question is less whether a society can claim greatness than whether its claim survives the scrutiny of who paid for it.

The argument, point by point
  • A society can legitimately claim greatness on the measure of achievement and provision for its people.
    Why Where a society delivers prosperity, safety and opportunity at scale, it meets a real standard of greatness that is not merely self-flattery, so the claim has substance.
    Example Singapore's rise from a resource-poor port to a high-income state with near-universal housing, one of the world's longest life expectancies and low crime is a genuine achievement by any standard (MOH / national data, as_of 2026-06).
    Then evaluate But achievement is not the only measure of greatness, and a society great by output can be questioned on the measure of freedom or equality, so the claim is partial.
  • Every claimed greatness, examined closely, tends to rest partly on a cost borne by someone less visible.
    Why Prosperity and order are often produced by burdens shifted onto the powerless, so the claim to greatness depends on whose experience is counted and whose is left out of the ledger.
    Example Singapore's prosperity rests partly on a large foreign workforce housed and governed separately from citizens, a structural reliance the COVID dormitory outbreaks made visible (MOM, as_of 2026-06).
    Then evaluate The complication: this does not cancel the achievement, but it qualifies the claim, since a greatness that excludes its builders is great only for those it counts.
  • Historical claims to greatness are especially suspect because they were so often built on domination.
    Why Empires and powers that called themselves great frequently did so on the back of conquest and exploitation, so the grandest claims carry the largest hidden costs.
    Example Social Darwinism and imperial ideology let colonial powers cast domination as civilisational greatness, an 'achievement' financed by the subjugated (widely documented, as_of 2026-06).
    Then evaluate This is why 'claim' is the operative word: the loudest self-declared greatness is often the one most dependent on costs it refuses to count.
  • Greatness measured by justice and how a society treats its weakest is the hardest claim to fake.
    Why Output and power can be displayed, but the treatment of the powerless is a measure that cannot be performed for show, so it is the truest test of a society's claim.
    Example A society's claim to greatness is tested less by its skyline than by its prisons, its care of the elderly and its welfare for the poor, where Singapore's asset-based model and rehabilitation regime both earn credit and invite scrutiny (national schemes, as_of 2026-06).
    Then evaluate The honest standard: a society can claim greatness most defensibly when its greatness includes those it could most easily exclude.
Strongest counter & rebuttal

Demanding flawlessness would make greatness impossible for everyone, and a society that lifts millions from poverty while imperfect on freedom may still be great on balance, so the perfectionist objection proves too much. But conceding that greatness tolerates flaws is not conceding that any claim goes: the test is whether the flaws are incidental or load-bearing, since a greatness that would collapse without the exploitation of its weakest is not flawed greatness but a cost relabelled as an achievement.

Measured conclusion

Any society can claim greatness on some real measure, and Singapore's achievements make a strong claim; how far the claim holds depends on whether its greatness includes or excludes those who paid for it, so the defensible answer is that societies can claim greatness to the extent that the claim survives an honest accounting of its hidden costs.

What makes this Band 1: Reaches the top band by treating 'claim' as the operative word, by holding achievement against justice as rival measures, and by making the hidden-cost test the hinge rather than a generic 'no society is perfect' caveat.
Option B · Premise-rejecting: who claims, and by what right

The question's real difficulty is not whether a society is great but who gets to make the claim and by what standard, because greatness is always claimed by the powerful within a society on criteria that suit them, so 'can any society claim to be great' dissolves into 'whose voice counts as the society's, and what are they choosing not to measure'.

The argument, point by point
  • A society does not claim anything; its dominant voices do, and they speak for the whole on their own terms.
    Why A 'society's' claim to greatness is authored by its governments, elites and majorities, so the claim reflects their experience and interests, not the experience of the marginalised who are spoken for.
    Example National greatness narratives are typically state-authored, as Singapore's official development story is, foregrounding achievement and backgrounding the costs to less powerful groups (national narrative, as_of 2026-06).
    Then evaluate So the question of whether a society can claim greatness is partly the question of who is allowed to speak as the society.
  • The criteria of greatness are chosen by the claimant, which makes most claims partly self-serving.
    Why A society great on growth claims greatness by growth; one great on equality claims it by equality, so each picks the yardstick on which it scores well, which is why nearly every society can claim greatness on something.
    Example Different states call themselves great by GDP, by military power, by welfare or by liberty, each selecting the measure that flatters it (global pattern, as_of 2026-06).
    Then evaluate The complication: if the claimant chooses the test, then almost any society can pass, which makes the bare claim nearly meaningless without an external standard.
  • A defensible claim therefore requires a standard the society did not set for itself.
    Why Greatness becomes meaningful only when judged against criteria outside the claimant's control, so external scrutiny, by the excluded, by outsiders, by history, is what separates real greatness from self-congratulation.
    Example The treatment of foreign workers, made visible in the COVID dormitory outbreaks, is the kind of external test that a self-authored greatness narrative would not have chosen to highlight (MOM, as_of 2026-06).
    Then evaluate This reframes the question: a society can claim greatness, but the claim is only worth anything when validated by those who had no hand in making it.
  • Once who-claims-and-by-what-standard is settled, even contested societies can earn the claim, but humbly.
    Why A society that subjects its own claim to external and internal scrutiny, and still measures up on how it treats the powerless, earns a greatness it did not simply assert, so humility about the claim is itself a mark of it.
    Example A society's willingness to acknowledge its blind spots, as the dormitory crisis forced a national reckoning, is closer to genuine greatness than a flawless self-portrait (widely documented, as_of 2026-06).
    Then evaluate The payoff: the societies most entitled to claim greatness are the ones least eager to, because they have internalised the standard rather than chosen it.
Strongest counter & rebuttal

A society that has eliminated absolute poverty, achieved long healthy lives and maintained peace has a greatness visible from any vantage point, so it is too sceptical to reduce every claim to the interests of the claimant. But even these evident achievements were measured by criteria someone chose, and the test still holds: such a society earns the claim precisely because its greatness survives being judged by standards it did not select, which is the reframe's point, not its refutation.

Measured conclusion

Any society can claim greatness, but the claim is authored by its powerful on criteria that suit them, so the real measure is whether the greatness survives a standard the claimant did not set, especially the judgement of those it excludes; a society can be great, but it earns the title most when it is least eager to award it to itself.

What makes this Band 1: Earns the top band by rejecting the question's surface to ask who claims and by what right, by making the self-chosen-criteria problem the hinge, and by arguing that external scrutiny and humility, not self-assertion, validate a claim to greatness.
How the two approaches differ

Option A calibrates by measure and applies a hidden-cost test, a society can claim greatness to the extent its greatness does not rest on harm to its weakest. Option B rejects the framing to interrogate who claims greatness and on whose criteria, arguing the claim is only meaningful against an external standard. Both are defensible: A is the measured conditions-based answer; B is the premise-rejecting move that reads as more conceptual if the who-claims question is held cleanly.

Common pitfalls
FAQ
What does 'great' mean in this essay?
That is the first move: separate great-as-powerful-and-successful from great-as-morally-admirable. A society can be great by output and questionable by justice, so naming which measure you are using, and testing the claim against more than one, is what lifts the essay above a list of achievements.
Why does the word 'claim' matter?
Because it signals that greatness is partly self-assessed. Societies declare their own greatness on criteria that flatter them and quietly omit the costs. Treating 'claim' as the operative word lets you ask the sharp question: whose greatness, measured by whom, and at whose expense?
Can I use Singapore for a general question like this?
Yes, as a strong test case. Singapore's genuine achievements make a real claim to greatness; its reliance on a separately governed foreign workforce, exposed by the COVID dormitory outbreaks, supplies the hidden-cost scrutiny the claim must survive. The pair shows both the substance and the test.
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